Excellent work Ewan! I can see you have worked hard to finish your learning. You have given reasons for whose point of view the paragraphs are from which is great. I like your wanted poster as it is clear and has all the required information.
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Excellent work Ewan! I can see you have worked hard to finish your learning. You have given reasons for whose point of view the paragraphs are from which is great. I like your wanted poster as it is clear and has all the required information.
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