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Thursday, August 13, 2020

My father:from Ewan

 I have been learning to right big stories about my father and about me and my father's girlfriend

DLO learning how to write lots and be a good boy of writing lots and lots of stuff

do you like my father slide and I hope you enjoy it give me a question yes know any question you like to say

3 comments:

  1. You write some lovely things about your father. I did see some private information on your slide that shouldn't be shared. I have made those parts black so other people can't see and then you can edit it.

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  3. hi you and it is me Liam I like the information about your father and his girlfriend jinny some funny stuff at your dad doesn't like and his girlfriend likes and what you don't like and it was very funny I think what you could have done better is to delete their last name and middle name. what was your favourite part? from Liam

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